Writing about our love,the eternal bliss...I remember taking your hand and pretty fingers to my lips..I wanted to love every inch of you, taste every bit of your body through your very pores. I Remember I wanted to get lost in your eyes..wanted to be consumed by your kisses during that night. It makes me miss our lips that met in soft kisses, our tongues began passion's war,we Forgot then, the outside world...
With your sweet caresses I desire you to touch my soul, with your passion
now if only you could lay down right beside me rite away you can hear the thunders that I Feel because my body crying for you.
I want to get lost Touching, feeling, exploring every emotion possible that goes beyond bliss..For I know such would be our time of togetherness and our time would come..this is how I dreamt our time when I would Want you like no other, Need you, like the air that I breathe, Together, one mind, one soul....Fused in the heat of passionate love forever! .
All of this is here, behind this little door called heart.Unspoken words flow onto the page, provoking reactions inside me today. Making me drive crazy...crazy to want you....I am becoming one with the page, wanting to feel close to each stroke of my own words, I seek your wonder and romance when I miss to be with you;
the touch which touches my face with tenderness,
and when you draw me near your body...
My destiny, today I laugh and I see tears, because baby, I am going to kill the damn terrorists and will try and be back home soon.
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ReplyDeleteI hope that means you like it! :)
DeleteAbsolutely! Without an inkling of doubt :)
ReplyDeleteI love how u have described the eternal emotion called love with those words... The distance, the longingness, the passion et al... keep writing darling coz ur amazing ...!
ReplyDeleteThank you so much. love itself is a beautiful feeling! and i have grown up seeing the Uniform love, it's powerful, like really!
DeleteMuch love,
Devina:)
Awesome piece Devina. I'm touched how have depicted the craving and the determination born out of that yearning to finish the job and run back to her arms.
ReplyDeleteI have written something related. I think you might like it. But unlike your positive write up, mine deals with sorrowful scenarios.
My poem Requiem @ http://anupampatracontemplates.blogspot.in/2012/05/requiem.html
My video based on my poem @ http://anupampatracontemplates.blogspot.in/2012/07/a-requiem.html
Since you've written such a splendid piece on a soldier's feelings, your feedback would be nice.
Keep writing Devina, you rock with pen, say keyboard.
Thank you so much Anupam! Army and love are closest to my heart because i come from this background where i have seen my parent's separation and love that is never uncalled for! i will surely check it!!
DeleteThanks and Love,
Devina :)
Army and Love.A combination which always leads to something interesting. Like this line - "My destiny, today I laugh and I see tears, because baby, I am going to kill the damn terrorists and will try and be back home soon."
ReplyDeleteI will definitely like to read more.
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